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Submitted: March 21, 2007
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All of the bikes caught my attention to start with. Then this lady kindly walked into my frame.

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Canon Elan-7~50mm~Ilford XP-2 -1/2

December '06
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Nice shot, but I think you need to lighten this image up a bit. Too dark overall. Let's get a bit of contrast in the composition.

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The MacNapier

"Everyone sees what you seem to be, few know what you really are."
*Niccolo Machiavelli*
cute bikes. but she's not really adding to the scene, it'd work better with either some interaction with or contrast to the bikes.
Dude, this is one of the best shots I have ever fucking seen from you. It could'nt be better. It's not too dark. I love the tones. I want a print of this no doubt. F1.8? F1.4? I've been seriously looking at it for 5 minutes straight. It's the shit.
I love the fact that she's in the shot, and also the fact that she's out of focus. It definitely adds to it.
I like it dark, nice shot.

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very nice composition
Too dark..but somehow giving a nice picture ;)

The lady doesn't see you right ?

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Yeah Imma have to go with what a lot of other people have said, this is rather heavy on the darker tonal range, but just lighten it up, just a little bit, not much because the highlights are already there to start with and we done want way more blow outs than we already have. As for composition, nice leading lines a little crooked. Which can be fixed when printing. Over all, nice image Jules.

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